She handed out brownies to the children stored in tupperware.

She handed out brownies stored in tupperware to the children.

 

With his tail held high, my father led the winning dog around the arena.

My father led the winning dog, with his tail held high, around the arena.

 

I saw the dead dog driving down the interstate.

Driving down the interstate, I saw the dead dog.

 

The girl was consoled by the nurse who had just taken an overdose of sleeping pills.

The girl who had just taken an overdose of sleeping pills was consoled by the nurse.

 

I saw an accident walking down the street.

Walking down the street, I saw an accident.

 

Freshly painted, Jim left the room to dry.

Jim left the freshly painted room to dry.

 

Source: https://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/CommonErrors_BestMod.html

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