Feedback on my writing

Currently I am offering only single sessions. 

Single session

USD 19.00/per 10 pages

An assessment of: 

• how well it achieves your stated aim (does it effectivley inform, direct, request and persuade)

• overall structure of the text (is it well organized; is there a logical flow; are the transitions effective)

• content and readability (is there missing or irrelevant content; an appropriate level of detail; language appropriate to the audience; Plain English rating)

Recommendations: 

Specific recommendations for revisions you need to make.

Does not include copyediting.